It’s uncanny – come Christmas and LJ is flooded with posts about God, atheism, faith, belief, blah. Either people are questioning their own belief system (or the lack of it thereof!) or laying it out for others to read, reflect, criticise, whatever…
Whatever be your motivation, bring ’em on! For the believers, it is an exercise in tolerance to read from those who don’t and likewise for the non-believers…:)
And for the rest of you who bravely grin through all the poetry that I inflict on you, here is another one! This is one of the funkiest poems that I have read in a long time and believer or not, you’ll enjoy it. It reads like rap poetry – a good idea would be to read it aloud. The imagery is wonderful and apart from the funky style that it’s written in, what I really love about it is the central theme. Read through and let me know what you, my esteemed readers, feel about this one.
Thus have I made up:
Once the Buddha was walking
along the forest path in the Oak Grove at Ojai,
walking without arriving anywhere or having any
thought of arriving or not arriving.
And lotuses, shining with the morning dew
miraculously appeared under every step
Soft as silk beneath the toes of the Buddha.
When suddenly, out of the turquoise sky,
dancing in front of his half-shut inward-looking
eyes, shimmering like a rainbow
or a spider’s web
transparent as the dew on a lotus flower
–the Goddess appeared quivering
like a hummingbird in the air before him.
She, for she was surely a she
as the Buddha could clearly see
with his eye of discriminating awareness wisdom,
was mostly red in color
though when the light shifted
she flashed like a rainbow.
She was naked except
for the usual flower ornaments
goddesses wear.
Her long hair
was deep blue, her eyes fathomless pits
of space, and her third eye a bloodshot
song of fire.
The Buddha folded his hands together
and greeted the Goddess thus:
“O goddess, why are you blocking my path?
Before I saw you I was happily going nowhere.
Now I’m not so sure where I go.”
“You can go around me,”
said the Goddess, twirling on her heel like a bird
darting away,
but just a little way away,
“or you can come after me
but you can’t pretend I’m not here,
This is my forest, too.”
With that the Buddha sat
supple as a snake
solid as a rock
beneath a Bo tree
that sprang full-leaved
to shade him.
“Perhaps we should have a chat,”
he said.
“After years of arduous practice
at the time of the morning star
I penetrated reality and.”
“Not so fast, Buddha,” the Goddess said,
“I am reality.”
The earth stood still,
the oceans paused,
the wind itself listened
–a thousand arhats, bodhisattvas and dakinis
magically appeared to hear
what would happen in the conversation.
“I know I take my life in my hands,”
said the Buddha,
“But I am known as the Fearless One
–so here goes.”
And he and the Goddess
without further words
exchanged glances.
Light rays like sun beams
shot forth
so brightly that even
Sariputra, the All-Seeing One,
had to turn away.
And then they exchanged thoughts
And the illumination was as bright as a diamond candle
And then they exchanged minds
And there was a great silence as vast as the universe
that
contains everything
And then they exchanged bodies
And then clothes
And the Buddha arose
as the Goddess
and the Goddess arose as the Buddha.
And so on back and forth
for a hundred thousand hundred thousand kalpas.
If you meet the Buddha
you meet the Goddess.
If you meet the Goddess,
you meet the Buddha.
Not only that. This:
The Buddha is emptiness,
The Goddess is bliss.
The Goddess is emptiness,
The Buddha is bliss.
And that is what
And what-not you are
It’s true.
So here comes the mantra of the Goddess and the
Buddha,
the unsurpassed non-dual mantra. Just to say this
mantra,
just to hear this mantra once, just to hear one word
of this
mantra once makes everything the way it truly is: OK.
So here it is:
Earth-walker/sky-walker
Hey silent one, Hey great talker
Not two/ not one
Not separate/ not apart
This is the heart
Bliss is emptiness
Emptiness is bliss
Be your breath, Ah
Smile, Hey, And relax, Ho
Remember: You can’t miss.
— Rick Fields
Everything is truly OK – so says the unsurpassed non-dual mantra!
gleefulfreak says:
that’s a totally excellent poem. 🙂
December 20, 2006 — 2:55 pm
Lakshmi says:
I agree – really cool style! Something else that I love is the way lotuses appear under His feet, a tree blooms to offer Him shade. That’s so incredibly touching.
December 20, 2006 — 2:59 pm
shri says:
Earth-walker/sky-walker
Hey silent one, Hey great talker
Not two/ not one
Not separate/ not apart
This is the heart
Bliss is emptiness
Emptiness is bliss
Be your breath, Ah
Smile, Hey, And relax, Ho
Remember: You can’t miss.
Love this! It is a different kind of poem but a nice one all the same. Like you said before, the imagery that the words evoke is wonderful!
December 20, 2006 — 3:07 pm
Lakshmi says:
Yeah, it reads like a rap song, I feel. It totally brings out the beauty in opposites and how both are really one and the same…:)
Be your breath, Ah
Smile, Hey, And relax, Ho
That is the best piece of advice anyone could get!
December 20, 2006 — 3:10 pm
shortiyergirl says:
I loved the imagery and of course “Bliss is emptiness Emptiness is bliss”
Thanks for bringing this my way.
December 21, 2006 — 12:43 am
Lakshmi says:
My pleasure in sharing – spread it around!
December 21, 2006 — 3:05 pm
fugney says:
Hey, I write scifi too you know. People just don’t read it:(
December 21, 2006 — 4:46 am
Lakshmi says:
I know you do but like I said earlier, I have some weird inherent resistance to reading sci-fi… sorry!
December 21, 2006 — 3:05 pm
fugney says:
Hmmm… do you see all sci-fi as martian westerns?
December 21, 2006 — 4:07 pm
Lakshmi says:
I don’t see sci-fi at all…:) Martian westerns – what?
December 21, 2006 — 4:09 pm
fugney says:
Oh, Ok. Well, I think Sci-Fi is of two sorts. First there are the (more popular) martian westerns. The badlands are replaced by outerspace, the cowgirl with some gun-toting chokri, the horse with the spaceship, and the bad guy with ugly aliens. Generally, the sort of stuff that hollywood likes to come up with.
On the other hand, there is Sci-Fi that is more detailed, un-corny, and likes to account for political and cultural changes. There is even Sci-Fi that has made it into mainstream literature… like George Orwell’s 1984 or Anthony Burgess’s A Clockwork Orange.
I was just thinking that a lot of people find SciFi childish, thinking it all to be “martian westerns”.
December 21, 2006 — 4:15 pm
Lakshmi says:
I have read the script for Stanley Kubrick’s film A Clockwork Orange – didn’t know that it was classified under Sci-Fi.
December 21, 2006 — 4:21 pm
fugney says:
Well, it was set in the future when the book was written. And it used scientific concepts like aversion therapy and stuff. In addition, its world-building presented a very interesting sort of dystopic society. I enjoyed reading the book a lot, despite having to deal with Nadsat (actually, because of that).
December 21, 2006 — 4:25 pm
fugney says:
scientific concepts like aversion therapy
My mistake, I wouldn’t know how scientific that is. But even pseudo-science is fine… when talking about the future, science fiction and fictional science have a thin line between them.
December 21, 2006 — 4:26 pm
Lakshmi says:
Ugh, I think aversion therapy was awful. Why is it scientific, I wonder… Haven’t read the book and so I don’t know who/what Nadsat is.
December 21, 2006 — 4:28 pm
fugney says:
Yeah, I’d agree on that. And it doesn’t seem to work that well either.
Nadsat is a fictional dialect invented by Burgess in order to account for possible cultural changes. Didn’t they use it in the film?
December 21, 2006 — 4:32 pm
Lakshmi says:
Can’t recall the use of a fictional dialect. Again, I have not seen the film – only read the script.
It struck me as too dark, too grim, almost surreal – I don’t think I’d watch the film.
December 21, 2006 — 4:39 pm
deelight says:
I loved the last part….you’re right one could rap on this.
December 21, 2006 — 7:29 am
Lakshmi says:
one could rap on this.
Someone should…:)
December 21, 2006 — 3:06 pm
spotty_sri says:
I feel blessed. 🙂 Thanks!
December 21, 2006 — 11:15 am
Lakshmi says:
Pleased to share – send it around..:)
December 21, 2006 — 3:06 pm
spotty_sri says:
Oooh, great, will send it off to a bunch of like-minded friends. Thanks!
December 22, 2006 — 5:00 am
psasidhar says:
Ah! I am a big fan of Shakti too. 🙂
December 24, 2006 — 3:24 am
Lakshmi says:
Great – I adore the band.
December 24, 2006 — 5:44 am
redclay12 says:
“Shoveling Snow with Buddha
Billy Collins
In the usual iconography of the temple or the local Wok
you would never see him doing such a thing,
tossing the dry snow over a mountain
of his bare, round shoulder,
his hair tied in a knot,
a model of concentration.
Sitting is more his speed, if that is the word
for what he does, or does not do.
Even the season is wrong for him.
In all his manifestations, is it not warm or slightly humid?
Is this not implied by his serene expression,
that smile so wide it wraps itself around the waist of the universe?
But here we are, working our way down the driveway,
one shovelful at a time.
We toss the light powder into the clear air.
We feel the cold mist on our faces.
And with every heave we disappear
and become lost to each other
in these sudden clouds of our own making,
these fountain-bursts of snow.
This is so much better than a sermon in church,
I say out loud, but Buddha keeps on shoveling.
This is the true religion, the religion of snow,
and sunlight and winter geese barking in the sky,
I say, but he is too busy to hear me.
He has thrown himself into shoveling snow
as if it were the purpose of existence,
as if the sign of a perfect life were a clear driveway
you could back the car down easily
and drive off into the vanities of the world
with a broken heater fan and a song on the radio.
All morning long we work side by side,
me with my commentary
and he inside his generous pocket of silence,
until the hour is nearly noon
and the snow is piled high all around us;
then, I hear him speak.
After this, he asks,
can we go inside and play cards?
Certainly, I reply, and I will heat some milk
and bring cups of hot chocolate to the table
while you shuffle the deck.
and our boots stand dripping by the door.
Aaah, says the Buddha, lifting his eyes
and leaning for a moment on his shovel
before he drives the thin blade again
deep into the glittering white snow.”
December 25, 2006 — 5:28 am
Lakshmi says:
Thanks for sharing. The poem feels a mite too long but it’s a good read nonetheless.
December 25, 2006 — 1:59 pm
redclay12 says:
it does feel too long,
but he is playing on his garrulousness.
December 29, 2006 — 8:21 pm